A rare day spent on writing poetry
Rewriting two poems; they weren't first drafts
I posted one of them for folk to see
On Write Out Loud, where I hoped to attract
A few comments and I have, so that's that
I have the other one still up my sleeve...
Yesterday, while at work, engaged in chat
With a pal in Newcastle, I conceived
An idea for a novel, play, even
About a comedian misanthrope
Although he's nasty, I'll play it for laughs
Funny's better than serious, I believe
This guy has no sense of humour, you see
Until he writes it down, becomes relaxed
What fun to read your blog in New York! Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite ... what hard work ...
ReplyDeleteHey Jude - I must C what you're up 2 in NYC
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